Works for me. The rim colors just give it a softer effect than a stronger color with more definition. Surely there must be room for both. But then I also liked the brown veins on Linda's 'cloud shadows' X (IMM x KIWI CHEESECAKE), so you can take my opinion fwiw!
Texas Zone 7b, USA where the only fall stalk is showing up on Tasco's AB CHAIN REACTION. Bud would be CA origin, natch.